Sample war essay + paragraph structure

Here's a sample war essay. It's a different question from the one that I gave in the test but most of the points can be used.

This essay has very clear paragraphs, something that all of you need to keep in mind:
- Topic sentence (make sure this answers the question directly)
- Elaboration/Evaluation (how & why/reasons)
- Examples
- Concluding statement (many of you have forgotten this but this is impt in reinforcing your idea. This statement should reiterate the main point of the paragraph)

Pls also remember that your introduction MUST include your stand/thesis statement.

Sample War Essay