Essays

Here are the first batch of essays that I've marked. I don't give exact marks and I don't correct all grammatical errors, just the ones that I think you need to take note of
The purpose of posting the essays is to let you learn from one another because you often make the same mistakes. It's not to embarrass anyone so if you are uncomfortable with having your name revealed to all, just let me know and I'll take it off
Internet1
Internet2
Schools (good)
Choice
Teenagers
Eating
Sport (some good points)